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dogmatix (dogmatix) wrote,
@ 2009-05-21 11:02:00

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sebastian and the beast

Sebastian and the Beast, 1 and 2/?
Title: Sebastian and the Beast 1 and 2/?
Rating: PG-13 for the most part?
Beta: yume_no_kage
Summary: Beauty and the Beast with a twist (and a wriggle)
A/N: Starting off with a bang, you guys get two pages. Don't expect this every week. XD;

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	joisbishmyoga 2009-05-21 12:21 pm UTC (link)
	Tee~~<3 It's so pretty~ A few minor quibbles: I have no idea what they mean by "behind enemy lines", and you might want to darken the hair of one of the boys. It's a little hard to tell them apart. (Or, at least, it will be if either of them get a costume change before they're parted.) (Reply to this) (Thread)

dogmatix
2009-05-21 08:25 pm UTC (link)

:D Thank you!

"Behind enemy lines" means just that - they were in the military together and thus have all the embarrassing stories that goes with being in service together. *sheepish* Sorry that didn't come though well. ^.^;;

Their resemblance is actually going to be part of the plot later, uhm. XD;; They really are very similar outside of costume, if you don't know them well, but they aren't going to have much of a costume change before parting. XD;;;

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	yaoifunboi 2009-05-21 12:24 pm UTC (link)
	Nice. I love queering fairy tales for some reason. I will follow this comic faithfully. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	dogmatix 2009-05-21 08:29 pm UTC (link)
	Yay! Welcome to the insanity. :3 (Reply to this) (Parent)

	white_aster 2009-05-21 05:52 pm UTC (link)
	Yay! I love the sweatdrops and Dirk's "jerkwad!" face. :D (Reply to this) (Thread)

	dogmatix 2009-05-21 08:30 pm UTC (link)
	XD Dirk is such an expressive character, I'm glad you like him! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	ladynero 2009-05-21 06:20 pm UTC (link)
	grins Oh so nice, but I gotta echo joisbishmyoga in telling the boys apart. Especially if someone's enjoying the comic too much to look at the small detail in the clothes. (Reply to this) (Thread)

dogmatix
2009-05-21 08:39 pm UTC (link)

^.^;; A-arg. I made them intentionally similar, but I guess I made them too similar, drat. XD; Pretty much Sebastian has slightly foofier hair in the back and fancier clothes. (and a scar on his left cheek, but that's not showing up as much as I thought it would =/ Hmmm.)

Thank you very much for letting me know though - I'm trying to improve and it helps to know where my blind spots are. ^_^

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	nishihime 2009-05-25 03:37 pm UTC (link)
	I think that if you make Sebastian's scar a bit longer that it would help. I can tell them apart because I look at the small details when reading a comic. Nice job so far. (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	dogmatix 2009-05-27 12:56 am UTC (link)
	Hmm. That's a possibility. Thank you. :) See you at A-kon. (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	nishihime 2009-05-27 08:50 pm UTC (link)
	When will you be there? I'll be there on Friday from around 11 in the morning till probably about 3 in the afternoon. I'm just going to be browsing around the artist alley since you don't need a badge for that and hanging out with some friends. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	(Anonymous) 2009-05-21 08:56 pm UTC (link)
	Hee! I look forward to the rest of this. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	dogmatix 2009-05-22 06:17 pm UTC (link)
	^__^ Yay! (Reply to this) (Parent)